Assignment 1: A2 Student Trailer Research/ Analysis & Assessment Record

Grade: Low C

WWW: The ending where there was lighting in the stares was really good they were creative to add light only where it was needed (the stairs) and not anything else. It kept the attention only in that area.

-The music was affective

-The editing in the beginning where they used the pace and the flashed images affect.

EBI: If the camera was steady at moments to create intensity 

- At the end it became to cliché they could have thought of something to boost an enigma like a trailer is suppose to.

-The ending should of had more light to the killer when he was extremely really close to the camera. 

Inspiration:
- The way they used the lighting in the stares to concentrate only on one area instead of the entire thing.
- The placing of establishing scenes in the middle of the beginning.
- Uses flashing images instead of black and white for a flash back.

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Grade: Low C

WWW: The camera was steady.
-The music fit in well with the thriller theme
- The props was really good especially the black blood was really good ( it was dripping instead of being just stained red hands).

EBI: If the lighting was better
- They had different volume controls to emphasise the mood of that moment.
- The editing pace needed to be picked up in order to give it that intense thriller affect to it.

Inspiration:
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Grade : Middle C

WWW: The context of the trailer is original and different
- The creativity of having the trailer with a different language mix with it.
- The titles and credits were really good and affect especially the contrast between big and small.

EBI: If there were different camera angles to give it a better and clearer intense affect
- If they had added foleys to add more intensity to the trailer
- If they had taken away the background noises to make it more clear . It wouldn't have taken away the concentration of the trailer

Inspiration:
- Use of different language
- The voice over of the conversation on the phone over a scene when she is walking in the alley way.
- The originality of the idea that they had.

SELF ASSESSMENT	N/A
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was  N/A.   This is    below   /   on   /   above   my target grade of a   B  .
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	My response is I need to do the following to improve:  Know the mark scheme More accurate grading Not strongest choice of videos