Film Poster Draft 2

Audience Feedback On Draft 3

Esere:

• The music changes from each shot making the climax build up.
• When the camera was really close to the character it made it very intense which caught my attention.
• It was very intriguing.

Alyah:

• I like the fast pace flashing scenes which built up the tension.
• It catches my attention.
• The music linked with the atmosphere.
• I like the recording effect that had the 'rec' at the edge of the screen.
• I like the scene when she was running and you could see the characters legs running.
• I like when the other character was dragged at the end.

Departed: Draft 3

Things that we improved:

• Music starts playing from the beginning.
• Sound effects of the production and distribution companies were taken out.
• Broken TV effect.
• Re-filmed scenes
• More titles
• Background music has changed 
• Different scenes 
• Echoed Sound effect 
• More build up of a montage
• Credits are better added in

Draft 3: Shotlist

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Departed: Draft 2

Things we improved on:

• The audience green banner was added to specifically identity which audiences were allowed to watch the trailer. ( green signifying appropriate for all audiences world wide).
•  The production and distribution companies were added (our own).
• Some extra scenes were added in to slightly revealing the supernatural presence. 
• The font of the title 'Departed' was changed and given an animation to it (blending in ).

Production And Distribution Company Logo Constrution

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After

• For Ravenhouse productions there was a sound effect added on top of the image of a flying bird to give it a better affect.
• The raven bird also falls in line with the supernatural genre of our trailer.

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After

• Sound effect was also added on top of the clock of a winding clock sound.

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